Monday, November 2, 2009

Catching the signal from one of her friends, Jeanette brushed her skirt, took a deep breath and walked towards where he was sitting. She saw him look at her with a big smile, her cheeks got as red as a rose. Then she looked back at her best friend Adriana not knowing what to do, and just took out her phone to try to cover up that she was nerves and keeps walking towards him. She was scared that she was going to say something wrong or the whole thing was going to go the wrong way.
"Hi Chris." You could tell by the tone in her voice that she was nervous.
"Hey, are you okay?"
She didn't know what to say. Because in reality their was something wrong, but she just didn't know how to say it.
"No, I'm fine"
She wanted to get it over with and just wanted to tell him that she liked him and that she wanted to go out with him, but if she told him she thought that she would sound desperate. So she was hoping that he would just get the idea but he didn't. At this point she just wanted to leave cause all they were doing was standing their in silence and she didn't know what to do.
Acting like she received a text Jeanette said "I have to go my mom just text me, I'll see you tomorrow kay"
"Okay, but can I call you tonight I wanna ask you something important?" he asked her.
"Yeah, but can you call around 7:30 cause i have cheer practice today" she said with a smile.
"Okay, well yeah bye" he said giving her a hug.
She walked to the car waiving bye to Adriana with a big smile. As soon as she got in the car she started thinking about what he was going to ask her. What if he asked me out tonight, she was thinking with a big smile on her face. That was the only thing she could think of during practice.
After practice she was sitting their like a calm cheerleader looking at her cell phone waiting for a phone call from a boy she really liked. Right when he asked her if she wanted to go out. Her heart dropped. Said yes super fast. And now it was official Chris was her boyfriend. she was the happiest girl in school the next day

2 comments:

  1. LOved how you changed the name of your person showd your personality of your writting and it's funny how alot of people wrote about a guy(cute littel love story)

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  2. i liked how you used your dialogue and that is how i think made the story more interesting :D

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